After combining my paper I read through the whole thing to pick out what needed to stay and what needed to go, I also added in more information where I thought it was necessary. I felt for the most part that my papers ran together well but I won’t know for sure until after the peer reviews. The information that I did take out was information I already used, and words that just didn’t need to be there. I also eliminated a lot of sentences that said, Also in this article I found. In stead I just went right into the information. I believe my paper is pretty damn good but I still  need another persons point of view. I know I will need a lot of work on my grammar for that fact that when I write I just write and I go back to fix everything later. Now that I am done with my intro, lit and methods it is now time for me to start going out and collecting the data I need from the females on this IUP campus so that my paper can finally be complete